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Wednesday, June 22, 2016

6 Word Challenge

The mighty Room 7 have been at it again! This time we have created an fantastic video that we would like to share with you all.  Our challenge was to tell a story in 6 words or less.  In the beginning of the writing process we found it difficult to try and express ourselves using just the 6 words. However, over the week we worked super hard and started to experiment using more descriptive language in our stories. By doing this we unleashed our inner writer and came up with what we think is a awesome Video.  Have a watch and tell us what you think.


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15 comments:

  1. HI my name is Katelin from Greymain school
    I really like how you have put that video on your blog Its a really good idea. How long did this take you?

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  2. Hello Room 7,
    I really like that video, they were some pretty cool little sentences that you guys made up that must off been hard making sentences with only 6 or less words. Did you guys think it was hard?

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  3. Hi Room 7 I'm Ry and thought 6 word sentences were amazing, they only have 6 words but they are inspiring, maybe next time you should wright 8 word sentences how did you come up with them?

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  4. Hello room 7, your 6 word challenge sounds hard but exciting. All of your stories sound excellent when you read it out loud. Was this writing hard?

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  5. Hello, room 7! Good job on the sentences! I like the way you made the sentence make sense so we could understand it. I think you used your descriptive language, and your apostrophes and commas. Did you write it about your life?

    Thanks Hannah from Grey Main School.

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  6. Great writing Room 7. I like the fact that some of the 6 word stories made me laugh, while others made me reflect and some made me wonder. What a great way to approach story writing. Here's one I created having been inspired by yours...
    Ty, Otto, sleeping balls of fur.
    Hope you enjoyed it! :-)

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  7. Hello Room 7 all of your writing is amazing but 6 words thats not much words and was it hard to write

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  8. Hi Room 7, I loved watching your video - you have all put a great deal of thought into what you have written. Great job!!!

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  9. That video was so cool you must have an awesome teacher. Signed Mr Stephen Ross's mother Narelle

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  10. Hi Room 7 - I agree with Ms McGrath, these poems are amazing and some are very funny!!! Many of them made me smile while others left me thinking how powerful they were. Congratuations on such creative writing. Kara :)

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  11. "Ingenious kids unleash awesome vocabulary. Cool!"

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  12. Hi guys I really like your song that you have with your presentation/DLO it really it is really cool

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  13. Hey room 7,
    my name is Trinatee I'm from room 11 at park estate school.
    I was impressed by the 6 words you used and the song because it was interesting next time you could make it more colourful.

    kind regards

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  14. Kia ora Room 7.
    I enjoyed watching the different ways you animated what you have written. There were some that were quite thought provoking and ones that I will remember. I would struggle to write with just six words but I have enjoyed seeing and reading yours. Thanks for sharing.

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