tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-492381568196150052.post6303477975417476703..comments2024-03-21T02:19:49.280+13:00Comments on Room 7 @ Waikowhai Primary School: Room 7's Awesome Writing Blog Admin 2016http://www.blogger.com/profile/11079451336142875327noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-492381568196150052.post-32001834547832002472017-05-31T10:53:14.795+12:002017-05-31T10:53:14.795+12:00hi my name is carlos i am in room 11 and i am 10 y...hi my name is carlos i am in room 11 and i am 10 years old well done keep the heard werk up.:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-492381568196150052.post-5609894855752257432017-05-03T15:00:41.666+12:002017-05-03T15:00:41.666+12:00Hi its Jasmine I’m from Room 9 I loved reading you...Hi its Jasmine I’m from Room 9 I loved reading you writing it really hooked me in. Room 7 I can’t wait to see you write some more . :3 What did you learn ?<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />byeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-492381568196150052.post-22251004999776996062017-05-03T14:55:32.237+12:002017-05-03T14:55:32.237+12:00Hi Room Seven it's Saskia from Room Nine and I...Hi Room Seven it's Saskia from Room Nine and I loved reading your writing because it really hooked me in, I also think you could work on your grammar more. But why would a hamster date something 100 times bigger than it? <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-492381568196150052.post-88476005893934927422017-04-06T14:36:22.799+12:002017-04-06T14:36:22.799+12:00Kia ora Room 7,
3 great pieces of creative writing...Kia ora Room 7,<br />3 great pieces of creative writing. Thank you for sharing. <br />Story 1 - I was hooked right from the start - a smelly and haunted cow shed certainly had me wondering what was going to happen inside... I am left wondering who is behind Dopy Peg Leg Pete... will I get to find out more soon?<br />Story 2 - Your words paint an interesting picture in my mind - a toenail growing bigger and bigger until it is the size of a baby! I'm a bit worried about what is going to happen to Jeremy with that cat Tom eyeing him up.. <br />Story 3 - Imagine being too busy polishing your diamonds to notice your store is getting robbed! A gangster hamster certainly made me laugh. Not good to hear that there is a problem with the bag, I wonder what will happen when the police come...<br />Look forward to reading more of your stories.<br />TaniaTaniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00034796099561779670noreply@blogger.com